Thursday, July 23, 2015

Assessment Two

1.                  Identify the nature of proof in Frank's monologue, siting evidence he used in Charlie's defense.

Frank’s ethos was based off of the fact that he was a retired military service member. When he addresses the court it is as though he feels like they have no authority and shouldn’t even be talking to Charlie. Frank’s character is manifested through every word he says in his obvious contempt of the court system in which he is taking part of. He builds up Charlie, and in the process tears down the rest of the school along with George. This makes him a person that others wish they could emulate. My favorite part was when the “douche bag” that was mediating the hearing said “Excuse me” and Frank told him “I don’t think I will”. Having the ability and courage that Frank showed was pretty amazing and he let the people know what kind of man he is and further establishes his ethos.

He briefly touches on his pathos and for a second talks about the man he used to be, as if he is less of a man now that he is old and blind. This induces some pity for the man he used to be. At the same time, I don’t think that changed the way that he is viewed. He is a man of integrity and shows it by standing up for Charlie when no one else seemed to care what would happen to him.

Frank does a good job in playing on the logos of what the schools principles are and what standards the school used to hold. He goes on to explain that they are no longer upholding those principles anymore but encouraging dishonest and spineless practices. As Frank explains that they are going to ruin Charlie’s life for nothing and they are producing a bunch of sheep that and a place that he calls “a rat ship…a vessel for sea going snitches”.



2.                  Of the four styles of dramatic or vicarious proof, which did Frank exploit to turn attitudes around about Charlie? How did this style function in terms of reason?

The strongest style of proof that was brought up was Frank’s personal narrative in which he gives background and an example of himself choosing right from wrong and did not make the right choices because they were “too damn hard.” His comparative reasoning helps us to understand that not everyone is perfect but can still be great men. He also uses testimony on behalf of Charlie saying that “he has come to the crossroads and has chosen the right path”. He also testifies that Charlie has integrity and character when he states “he won’t sell anybody out to buy his future” and that is the stuff that leaders should be made of.



3.                  What cultural myths or images were employed to increase the appeal of Frank's argument? How did this influence his attempted shift of opinion?

The presence of conspiracy was very prevalent in this clip from the movie. The whole argument is based off of the fact that the Baird school is corrupt and that the institution has degraded past its usefulness. He then asked them to consider what the worth of his soul was and how it would affect Charlie for the rest of his life. I think that it made the difference in shifting the opinion of the board to actually consider the ramifications of what expelling Charlie would have. I also saw the value of challenge brought up when he asked them to consider that they held the future of Charlie in their hands. This coincided with what he told them about the value of his soul, and that it was at stake. Then to solidify the emotional connection, he informed them that their decision could destroy Charlie’s soul.


4.                  Which of Reich's parables apply or applies to Frank's reasoning?

There is potential for all of Reich’s cultural parables in this example. The one that was used to strike first was the rot at the top. The whole argument starts with the idea that the institute has a fallen moral compass and that the people leading are not fit to do so. He chastises the institution for having a set of standards that are no longer being followed because they are not enforced or seemingly encouraged. You could see the disdain for the person mediating the court proceedings and wanted to teach him a lesson of how to be an actual leader. He then made reference to the types of leaders their corrupt system was sending out into the real world.


5.                  What was Frank's reasoning in terms of logical appeal?

In this video I saw reasoning from a dilemma. The person who is presiding over the hearing expresses the idea of what he thinks the school is and maintains the thought that if you are not going to tell us what happened then you are not part of us. He tries to almost guilt trip Charlie into giving away his integrity for something that he doesn’t believe in. He then gives Charlie a choice that he can either tell him what he wants to hear or be expelled from the school. He forces the dichotomous situation on Charlie as if those are his only two options. He is only trying to get what he wants through means of manipulation in one of the most unethical scenes I have ever witnessed and shows how weak he is in the process.  

6.                  How did Frank's paralinguistic’s impact his expression and the meaning of his words? Please give specific examples – three will do.

1.)    The way that he sits back for the first half of the trial as if he doesn’t think what they are accusing Charlie of carries any weight. Then nonchalantly accuses the whole proceedings to be “bull shit”.
2.)    Another is when he stands and becomes aggressive because he feels like they are not listening to what he is saying. He commands attention from the audience and board members to hear what he is saying by raising his voice and using some profanity to execute a point.

3.)    I think that the inflection in his voice gives away to some aggressive nature that Frank has had, probably from his military service. He lets them know he is a commanding presence in the room and that he WILL be heard. He keeps talking about Charlies “soul” and that they have charge over it in this instance but “it will not be bought”. 

Wednesday, July 15, 2015


Topic: How military service prepares and gives you a sense of direction in all aspects of life.

Specific Purpose: To understand and re-establish the values our nation was built upon by using military service as a base.

Thesis Statement: Everyone should serve in the military because you will learn our nation’s values of LDRSHIP, you gain skills that future employers are looking, and you will gain life experience all while getting paid to do so.

I. Introduction
A. Attention-Getting Step: Personal Story about how I came to my decision to join the military.

B. Tie to Audience: Almost everyone knows someone who is, or who has served in the military.

C. Credibility Material:
These are the Values that you learn during your first days in service. They are something that you never forget because of their importance.


II. Body

A. Main Point #1
We need a value system that is widely accepted as a norm across multiple cultures.

1. (Statement of Need for Action).
It is up to us to instill these values and help our country follow them if we are to remain strong as one nation. The Army Values give us those core beliefs that our founding fathers built this country on.

a. (Description of Problem).
The younger generation that is coming up, as my drill instructor used to say, “is softer than baby shit!”

b. (Signs, Symptoms, Effects of Problem).
The effects are that we become weak as a nation and lose the freedoms we love so much to a government that will dictate over us.

c. (Example, Narrative, or Testimony).
When I was a range NCO for a training, and a soldier said he was scared to fire his weapon!


B. Main Point #2
On the job training and experience in working as a team.

1. (Statement of Need for Action).
Our nation ranks 14th for education among the 1st world countries. Part of that is lack of interest of people attending schools and not giving 100% in learning all they can.

a. (Description of Problem).
Top things employers are looking for. Employers right now are very specific in what they are looking for in a new employee and it’s clear that we are not delivering because they have been asking for it for over a decade.

b. (Signs, Symptoms, Effects of Problem).
Some signs are rejection of applicants due to no experience where it is needed.

c. (Example, Narrative, or Testimony).
That is a reason why the military saw an influx of people joining even during war time.

C. Main Point #3
Getting to travel and meet new people while figuring out your direction in life.

1. (Statement of Need for Action).
People need to get out get involved with different cultures and events to figure out what they like to do. If you love what you do for work, you’re never really working!

a. (Description of Problem).
The upcoming generation doesn’t know what they want to do with their lives. They are not making good decisions based on the limited life experience they have.

b. (Signs, Symptoms, Effects of Problem).
People switching jobs many times in their life.

c. (Example, Narrative, or Testimony).
I personally had over 7 jobs from the time I was 18 till I joined the Military.


III. Conclusion

A. Summary

B. Tie Back to Attention-Getting Step: All of these things have helped me to become the person I am today. Someone that is marketable with many life experience and the ability to work with a team.

C. Call for Action: If you’re seeking opportunities to be a better member of society, have job experience, and travel the world for free then joining the military is the right move for you.

Bibliography

Adams, Susan. (2013). The 10 Skills Employers Most Want in 20-something Employees. Forbes Magazine.                            14 Jan 2015. Retrieved from http://www.forbes.com/sites/susanadams/2013/10/11/the-10-    skills-employers-most-want-in-20-something-employees/


The Army Values. Retrieved from http://www.army.mil/values/index.html

Tuesday, July 14, 2015

Post #3 – Reich

The artifact that I have chosen is Hillary Clinton’s response to the email debacle when she served as the Secretary of State.


This is a unique story because I feel like it encompasses all of Reich’s cultural parables. Working down the list I will try and explain my reasoning for each one. Throughout all of them are each of the process premises of the people’s needs, emotions, our attitude towards her policy, and the lack of consistency in her speech.

Mob at the gates: From this parable there is a multitude of people calling for her head due to the implications of her potentially committing several crimes and legally committing several crimes as well. There are numerous people that speak out in objection to her decisions and want some answers. Rightly so because of the nature of her job, there were some national security problems which her choices caused. The misleading and lack of information given to the people caused an uproar that would be hard to extinguish. The American people felt as though they were betrayed and lied to and a vast majority, felt like they could not trust her or her motives behind her actions.

The Triumphant Individual: Although Hillary is not considered to be “the little guy” she received a lot of grief over her poor decisions as secretary of state, and still came out of her seemingly apparent failure as a presidential candidate. As my dad used to say, “How do some people fall in a pile of shit and come out smelling like a rose?” I think that even though she made some very wrong choices it didn’t affect her as some initially thought. She is still a very powerful woman and is in the running for a presidential slot (which scares the hell out of me).

The Benevolent Community: This one is interesting to me. After all of her scandal and crap that was being thrown at her, Hillary still had a huge populous rally around her and tell her how great she was and give her props for apparently committing a crime and getting away with it. It somehow gave her some sort of “street credibility” if you will. She has a large following that will support her through just about anything it seems.

Rot at the Top: This is where I see Hillary shine. To me she is a cancer that needs to be removed. She has gained much ground in the past years leading to her again presidential race through a midst of her failure after failure. She gets Americans killed in Benghazi, lies about emails in her personal account and discards each of them as if they were just a simple mistake like leaving the bathroom light on. However, she is too powerful, wealthy, and public to have anything happen to her. She, and people like her are what is wrong with our country. Getting away with things is an art to them that can easily be mastered in the eye of the public.


Not that my opinion counts for much, but I would like to see her in prison right next to Obama and John Kerry. Her persuasion techniques might work on people who don’t know any better but I am not one of them. She speaks through both sides of her mouth and never clearly gets to her stance and views on what is asked of her. I would rather let Donald Trump’s hair be president over Hillary Clinton. Also, sorry this is so damn long!